Joseph Lenz dogtag... Edit

Who wrote that info???

After escaping the military, before entering the office building, in a tree in the sitting area. Shadizar666 (Ruck Rules) 02:45, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Strange. When I went to edit the page, that section read just fine.  M67PattonZippo (talk) 13:43, April 17, 2017 (UTC)
Agreed @M67, I see no errors. Snivystorm (talk) 15:46, April 17, 2017 (UTC)
I didn't say it was wrong, I'm saying it's too ambiguous. Once the military is engaged, you are in a "chasm", when you escape the military, you are in another chasm. Hell, it could have been said, "after looking at the capital building... etc..." and that would be a clear starting point. Shadizar666 (Ruck Rules) 16:54, May 2, 2017 (UTC)
Ahh I see what you mean now. Perhaps you could edit the page to make the point clearer? Snivystorm (talk) 17:44, May 2, 2017 (UTC)