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  • Snivystorm
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    08:14, September 11, 2017

    I just want to know what others think, and i know it's 2016 but i just need an answer

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    • I'm 15 and so do I :)

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    • Awesome :]

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    • So, you don't think it's weird if I'm 2 years older?

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    • Not really, people like people 10+ years older, I mean if you were like 20 and she was still 14 then probably.

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    • Basically , i draw the line at 3 years, and i was just wondering if anybody thought 2 years was too much cause i feel a bit weird about it myself cause of the young age :[

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    • Well I have an crush on Joel and he's like 50 and I'll be 29 soon. :) BTW 3 years is not much of an age difference.

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    • Do you mean that it's wierd that you're two years older and you like her, or that she's a fictional character and you like her? Neither are strange; she's brave, relatable, and ND did an amazing her job making her believable as a real person.

      If you're like, 10 years older, I think you may have issues though. 

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    • I meant weird in the 2 years older sense, but thx to you guys i no longer feel that way

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    • I guess i was just looking at it by grade standards(I'm 16 in 11th grade and 2 years back is a 14 year old in 9th grade)

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    • Trust me, once you get old enough 2 years' difference doesn't seem major at all. I'm about to marry someone who's exactly two years younger than me, myself. 

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    • I like Ellie alot, I wish I can adopt her

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    • Wow, Thats awesome man. Stay Happy forever you guys :)

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    • I know "Like Like" sounds pretty stupid but i don't know if it would be ok to say anything like Love.

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    • Thanks :) 

      When I think of "love", I think of two people who have come to deeply understand and admire each other's characteristics and personality. Like, it'd be impossible for love to form between two people if one doesn't know the other one exist. 

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    • Yeah, thats basically what i think myself. would be pretty weird if someone said Love

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    • If your willing to put in the effort write a fiction guys. I've just finished one

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    • You Mean, Write a FanFiction?

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    • Yeah. I've done a few, not just on TLOU.

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    • Idk Man, Would it seem right if someone wrote a story about them and a fictional character in a romancey(Not a word Xp) type way?

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    • 71.48.26.179 wrote: Idk Man, Would it seem right if someone wrote a story about them and a fictional character in a romancey(Not a word Xp) type way?

      Doesn't have to be about them, they could be inspired by their feelings thus the way they write is influenced by those feelings, making it more relatable and arguably making for a more natural story. Their character would be based upon themselves, rather than a "carbon copy" character.

      It's like when anyone writes a love story; the way the two characters feel about each other is usually a mirror of how the writer was/believes they would/has felt/feel.

      It would perhaps be weird if they descended it in to some kind of disturbing book a kin to [do I have to say it? *nods head* D: fine...] 50 Shades of Grey or something.

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    • Ohh I get what you mean, I'm not much of a writer but i guess i could try to write one :)

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    • M67PattonZippo
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    • I felt the same way on that david part LoL, Yeah i know i gotta move on in the future, this year i was gonna get my license and i have a chance to graduate early from the scool im at so my life will be much different by the time this summer hits. but aside from that i waited a while before i played TLOU(December 2015) and I had begun to like Ellie, and i want to try to possibly write a Fanfiction because i still like her, and i know no one should ever countinue to focus on fictional character for a long time especially as an adolescent so thats why i want to embrace my crush on her while i can :)

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    • Snivystorm wrote:

      71.48.26.179 wrote: Idk Man, Would it seem right if someone wrote a story about them and a fictional character in a romancey(Not a word Xp) type way?

      Doesn't have to be about them, they could be inspired by their feelings thus the way they write is influenced by those feelings, making it more relatable and arguably making for a more natural story. Their character would be based upon themselves, rather than a "carbon copy" character.

      It's like when anyone writes a love story; the way the two characters feel about each other is usually a mirror of how the writer was/believes they would/has felt/feel.

      It would perhaps be weird if they descended it in to some kind of disturbing book a kin to [do I have to say it? *nods head* D: fine...] 50 Shades of Grey or something.

      Pretty much what I done it even got a sequel (abliet much better written) it just takes a lot of time and effort both of my major TLOU's took about 6 months combined

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    • 71.48.30.197 wrote:
      I felt the same way on that david part LoL, Yeah i know i gotta move on in the future, this year i was gonna get my license and i have a chance to graduate early from the scool im at so my life will be much different by the time this summer hits. but aside from that i waited a while before i played TLOU(December 2015) and I had begun to like Ellie, and i want to try to possibly write a Fanfiction because i still like her, and i know no one should ever countinue to focus on fictional character for a long time especially as an adolescent so thats why i want to embrace my crush on her while i can :)

      Hey dude.  Not having a go.  But you missed the point.  I mean, I do not fantasise over Ellie that much or go out of my way to you know.  Maybe the one time.  I am not in love with Ellie I dont think.  I also think as well I liked her as a sister as I have always wanted a sister rather than abrother to look out for.  And Ellie would be a great sister.  

      And the whole post I made I really tried to point out she is not a adolscent anymore.

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    • Oh dang, Sorry about that man 

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    • I wasn't thinking that you liked her, i thought you were telling me i have to move on at some point and i was just stating my feelings on that matter

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    • Hey im not having a go at you or hating lol.   My feelings about her are all messed up but like I said I have threeideas about it.   1)  I have a crush on her.   2) She is like a sister to me  3) that friend you always protect.  


      And i have nothing against your feelings for her.  She is 17 there abouts now and the only thing like myself need to do is understand.  Shes not real.  That is the main jist of things.  I rp as Ellie on IMVU and had relationships with others etc.  If youw ant we can chat on IMVU or facebook.   (SOrry if that is not allowed im new)

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    • I don't have any of those so we can't chat  Sorry^^', Thanks man it's good to know that she would be around my age :)

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    • well yes she would.  the game really came out in 2013 when she was 14.  so two years later she would be 16 going 17 so really her age is 16/17 now.

      As it is a game.  She cannot  "age" as she is not real.  Plus she has a uncanny resemblance to Ellen Page

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    • Yeah

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    • good answer haha ;)

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    • Lol XP

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    • I just noticed something, when the game came out in the summer of 2013 i was 13 going on 14 in August. So i'm about the same age :D

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    • I also think Ellen Page is pretty hot, i just think it's uncanny how ellie looks like her but has nothing, at all, to deal with TLOU

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    • I know i'm probably talking to much LolXP, but i have one more thing to say

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    • Basically i created a plot for my fanfiction and it goes like this. After the events of TLOU Joel and Ellie return to Tommy's place and they've been there for 2 months, and then one day they stumble upon a 16 year old African-American boy by the name of Ty(Based on me :P) who says he found they're town when travelling with a group but ended up as the lone survivor of it because of a group of Infected beforehand. Ultimately he ends up being allowed in the shelter(Although not easily thanks to Joel and Tommy) and he goes on and about helping everyone in daily routines and issues with Infected and Hunters.

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    • Ty i actually immune to the Infection and is later found out by Ellie who is then asked to keep it a secret until he finds out she is as well, Ty decides to tell Ellie about his whole backstory which deals with a group that "Supposedly" took on the legacy of the fireflys and called themselves the Pry-Mantis. The Pry-Mantis was a group of hunters who served as soldiers for hire by the milatary and in exchange given rations, Thier so called goal was to find a cure for humanity but the truth was that they experiment on Humans and Infected alike in order to create super soldiers for the military

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    • Basically The Pry-Mantis figured out Ty was Immune when they attacked the camp him and his siblings(An older sister named June and a younger brother named John) had several miles away during an Infected invasion where the siblings and Ty was bitten, They took in all of the Infected dead but took the siblings in alive where after 2 days the siblings turned and were shot dead all except for Ty who was then put into custody and being shipped to a lab that was past Tommy's place but before they got there they were attacked by 7 bloaters and a pack of clickers where Ty escaped luckily using lockpicking skills and stealing the truck until he ran out of gas and met Joel and Ellie out on patrol.

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    • Ellie was thrilled that there was someone else who was immune just like her and wanted to tell Joel but Ty still told her to keep it a secret because he was scared of being kicked out of town for not being trusted because of him being an outsider. Weeks later Ty and Ellie have bonded more and became close friends and even Joel took a liking to him because of his survival skills(Learned from his sister) and him being a close friend to ellie ultimately making her more happy. Happy times were there but it didn't last long because the group soon found some of the now "little to none" fireflys, where ellie finds out that joel lied and stuff begins to happen.........

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    • Aaaannnnd thats all i have right now XD

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    • 71.48.30.197 wrote: Aaaannnnd thats all i have right now XD

      Why not start your own thread for exploring the fan fiction or visit the fan fiction wiki for the last of us, it is rather out of context to clog the chat with a fan fic almost completely unrelated to the thread, as fleshed out as the idea was.

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    • But it is related to the thread, earlier i said that i was gonna right a fanfiction about romance between a character based on me and ellie

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    • I just wanted it to have a good story to it lol, didn't want it to become some story that wouldn't make much sense and pop som romance into it

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    • 71.48.31.189 wrote: But it is related to the thread, earlier i said that i was gonna right a fanfiction about romance between a character based on me and ellie

      My apologies, I had failed to notice the message in the thread.

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    • Its Alright XD

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    • I know i'm bringing this out of nowhere but, if you guys litsen to Bryson Tiller-Hit by love again it's kinda cool because it seems like it's explaining joel's feelings for ellie(Excluding the line at 1:42 though :P)

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    • Sorry for going off topic guys ^^'

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    • So.... is their anyone who thinks 2 years is too far apart?

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    • As pointed out.  Shes 17 now.   Read up. 

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    • Ohh yeah, Sorry

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    • M67PattonZippo
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    • This is Wikia Contributer 71.48.31.128 and I decided on creating an account ^^

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    • Disregard that post i made asking about your ages, I feel stupid for asking that and i have no idea how to get rid of it lol ^^'

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote:
      Disregard that post i made asking about your ages, I feel stupid for asking that and i have no idea how to get rid of it lol ^^'

      hover curser over post, press more and remove

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    • When i click more on that post all it says is history  :(

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote:
      Disregard that post i made asking about your ages, I feel stupid for asking that and i have no idea how to get rid of it lol ^^'


      I think only admins (like me) can delete forum posts. I'll take care of it.

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    • Can you delete my comments too.  I can give you a reason if you require.  

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    • Thanks Patton :)

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    • M67PattonZippo wrote:
      TyEverGreen9 wrote:
      Disregard that post i made asking about your ages, I feel stupid for asking that and i have no idea how to get rid of it lol ^^'

      I think only admins (like me) can delete forum posts. I'll take care of it.

      I can delete my own and I'm not an admin.

      Account holders only?

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    • Mcposg117 wrote:
      M67PattonZippo wrote:
      TyEverGreen9 wrote:
      Disregard that post i made asking about your ages, I feel stupid for asking that and i have no idea how to get rid of it lol ^^'

      I think only admins (like me) can delete forum posts. I'll take care of it.
      I can delete my own and I'm not an admin.

      Account holders only?


      Yeah, that probably is an account-only sort of thing, not something an anon can do.

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    • Ohh, so thats why

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    • Makes sense

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    • Yeah

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    • i never get answered on here

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    • You talking about  the "delete my posts" post?

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    • Yeah dude

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    • Tell him on his message wall

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    • Pretty sure he'll see it then ^^

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    • 92.238.250.33 wrote:
      i never get answered on here

      Why do you want me to delete your posts, anyway?

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    • I'm wondering why as well

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    • As really my point  made never really got followed or really was looked at.  So no point me wanting to be involved really

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    • What do you mean? I know she would have been around my age because of you man :) 

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    • I just feel like a creep lol Dont know why lol.  Plus with my point now have helped theres no need for it lol

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    • Ok I understand, just tell Patton and he'll delete them

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    • Is their anybody who thinks i should countinue that fanfiction i was talking about earlier? 

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    • Well....thats a no, lol

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote:
      Is their anybody who thinks i should countinue that fanfiction i was talking about earlier? 

      It's a good start but could use some work.

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    • Thx but, What should I do to make it better?

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote: Thx but, What should I do to make it better?

      Flesh out the Ty character some more. Is he going to be as depth a character as Joel and Ellie or is he just there to further the plot? Of course, in the world of the Last of Us, all the characters are meant to make us feel attached. I advise making U.S. bond with them only to kill them off within like a chapter. Take Shawn Greene from the Walking Dead. We, as Lee, bonded with him and, in turn, rescued by him. But that was it; he was killed the very next day (roughly 20 minutes from our perspective) so he was just there for plot device.

      Do you want that sort of character or one like say, Kenny, who the player grows to have probably the deepest relationship with all of the characters (as he isn't just tossed away at a writer's discretion).

      I know I'm just assuming you've played that game but it's the best comparison I can think of on the spot ahahah 8)

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    • I've seen some of The Walking Dead but I never played it lolXP, I'm trying to make Ty the type of character like Kenny, because he's supposed to be the love interest of Ellie, or rather vice-versa cause he's based on me ^^ 

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote: I've seen some of The Walking Dead but I never played it lolXP, I'm trying to make Ty the type of character like Kenny, because he's supposed to be the love interest of Ellie, or rather vice-versa cause he's based on me ^^ 

      Oh yeah, hence the name xD. You gotta make the love relationship believable, something relatable for the audience you're aiming at, though that's going to be tough when set in post-apocalyptic future.

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    • Yeah Lol XD

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    • Do you guys have any ideas i can go with to set the mood for romance?

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote:
      Do you guys have any ideas i can go with to set the mood for romance?

      That is the tricky part. Here's the url to my TLOU fics which have a similar context to yours that I done a while ago (there not the best things I've ever written but I'm getting better).

      Not Alone: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11306675/1/The-Last-of-Us-Not-Alone

      Old Relations: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11446652/1/The-Last-of-Us-Old-Relations

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    • Just base the protagonist of what you'd do in that situation under the stress.

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    • Mcposg117 wrote: Just base the protagonist of what you'd do in that situation under the stress.

      Which situation are you referring to?

      Regarding your fanons, the centre piece is certainly a good idea but it sadly lacks originality, for me anyway, it could literally be any character. Change the names and it's a different story with the exact same plot. What it needs is flair, depth, and immersing characters, no clichés.

      Perhaps you yourself could push it further? I would certainly love to read your fanons again once they've been improved :)

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    • Mcposg117 wrote:
      Just base the protagonist of what you'd do in that situation under the stress.

      Ok I'll try, wish me luck :P

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    • Hall this talk of fanon is tempting me to revisit the ones I started years back ^_^ ahh the memories.

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    • XP

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    • Snivystorm wrote:

      Mcposg117 wrote: Just base the protagonist of what you'd do in that situation under the stress.

      Which situation are you referring to?

      Regarding your fanons, the centre piece is certainly a good idea but it sadly lacks originality, for me anyway, it could literally be any character. Change the names and it's a different story with the exact same plot. What it needs is flair, depth, and immersing characters, no clichés.

      Perhaps you yourself could push it further? I would certainly love to read your fanons again once they've been improved :)

      Yeah I see what you mean but I'm taking a break from TLOU and trying a RWBY one with which from what I've written so far is already a vast improvement.

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    • 58.106.7.106 wrote:
      Snivystorm wrote:

      Mcposg117 wrote: Just base the protagonist of what you'd do in that situation under the stress.

      Which situation are you referring to?

      Regarding your fanons, the centre piece is certainly a good idea but it sadly lacks originality, for me anyway, it could literally be any character. Change the names and it's a different story with the exact same plot. What it needs is flair, depth, and immersing characters, no clichés.

      Perhaps you yourself could push it further? I would certainly love to read your fanons again once they've been improved :)

      Yeah I see what you mean but I'm taking a break from TLOU and trying a RWBY one with which from what I've written so far is already a vast improvement.

      Ugh I forgot to sign in again

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    • Lol

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    • It's cool 8)

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    • Happens to everyone eventually

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    • I almost did the same thing once :P

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    • It'll happen

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    • Yea it probably will XD

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    • (Sigh) writing a story is harder than i thought :(, I'm trying to write a romance scene between Ty and Ellie after the whole Firefly thing with some dialogue, but i feel like it kind of sounds unprofessional and unrealistic and i didn't even get to the romance section yet.

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    • I feel like i'm good at coming up with ideas and new characters, but when it comes to creating the actual story piece by piece, I suck at it lol

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote: I feel like i'm good at coming up with ideas and new characters, but when it comes to creating the actual story piece by piece, I suck at it lol

      Practise makes perfect and, when writing a story, the first draft is never going to be as good as the last. It's something you have to keep doing over and over until you're finally convinced it couldn't be any better!

      Just gotta keep at it, find some advice, perhaps a English/story writing expert?

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    • Snivystorm wrote:

      TyEverGreen9 wrote: I feel like i'm good at coming up with ideas and new characters, but when it comes to creating the actual story piece by piece, I suck at it lol

      Practise makes perfect and, when writing a story, the first draft is never going to be as good as the last. It's something you have to keep doing over and over until you're finally convinced it couldn't be any better!

      Just gotta keep at it, find some advice, perhaps a English/story writing expert?

      I'm no writing expert but I'll be happy to help.

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote:
      (Sigh) writing a story is harder than i thought :(, I'm trying to write a romance scene between Ty and Ellie after the whole Firefly thing with some dialogue, but i feel like it kind of sounds unprofessional and unrealistic and i didn't even get to the romance section yet.

      I hate to break it to you, but isn't Ellie lesbian? Or at least bisexual?

      As far as experience goes, maybe talk to someone who is an author?

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    • Yeah i know about that, but it doesn't really bug me since i have feelings for her and not vice-versa and theres still the chance that she could be bi so. About the author thing, Could you help me out a little Mcposg?

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    • Sorry about responding so late, had some school work to finish up

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    • Do you think you could help me a little as well Snivy? :P

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    • Sure Green if you got a fanfic.net acount you could Private Message me (SPARTAN-G117) drafts and soforth and give you my advice

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    • Alright, gotta go make a fanfic account lol

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    • It says i have to wait for a day before i can PM

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    • Ah I forgot about that.

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    • I have a small unfinished scene done already so i guess i'll tell you about it tomorrow, when we can PM

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    • Also, Do you know if Snivy has a Fanfic account?

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote: Also, Do you know if Snivy has a Fanfic account?

      No, I do not. I don't like the way they format the story when you read it on there, but I still got wikis!

      Isn't there s last of us fanon wiki?

      Edit: There is http://thelastofusfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Special:WikiActivity Wow that takes me back. Of course, the story ha grow. From what is present there haha. Shame there are no active admins on there,,,

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    • Snivystorm wrote:

      TyEverGreen9 wrote: Also, Do you know if Snivy has a Fanfic account?

      No, I do not. I don't like the way they format the story when you read it on there, but I still got wikis!

      Isn't there s last of us fanon wiki?

      Edit: There is http://thelastofusfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Special:WikiActivity Wow that takes me back. Of course, the story ha grow. From what is present there haha. Shame there are no active admins on there,,,

      Well it is sorta only 12 pages big

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    • Yeah, no one really took to it and the Admins have kinda just left it there. What Fanon needs is a community. The one on the Avatar wiki has always been the best example, to me anyway,

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    • RWBY's fanon is pretty big too and a big help

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    • Indeed, they have several help pages and the like.

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    • I probably would be stuck up the creek without a paddle with out them

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    • If the admins there haven't edited in a while, you could put in  a request to adopt the wiki over on Community Central.

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    • M67PattonZippo wrote: If the admins there haven't edited in a while, you could put in  a request to adopt the wiki over on Community Central.

      I don't know, I'm already managing 4 wikis as it is and, if I took that role on, I'd have to effectively make the place from scratch on my own. It's just too much work for me I'm afraid.

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    • I didn't know they had a TLOU fanon wiki, Isn't it still possible to talk on there even without the admins?

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote: I didn't know they had a TLOU fanon wiki, Isn't it still possible to talk on there even without the admins?

      Yes, of course! It's just there is no one there with the tools of being an Admin and such, so no one to monitor things and the like. Plus, there is little content. It's lacks help pages, a proper main page etc.

      You can still post stuff on there as well, but the rules should still be adhered to. Not that this stops vandals though.

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    • Do you guys want to talk on there or should we stay on here and continue talking on the forum?

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    • To tell the truth i would rather stay on here since other people could join in and we don't have to worry about random comments and trolls.

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote: To tell the truth i would rather stay on here since other people could join in and we don't have to worry about random comments and trolls.

      The problem with that is that this isn't a Fanon wiki. So the work will most likely be deleted as it doesn't belong here. The Fanon wiki is actually extremely quiet; so few pages means it's a wiki few can find; so you could easily use the wiki.

      If you are so worried about any vandals and the like showing their faces, just ask community central for admin rights on the wiki so you can deal with them yourself!

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    • I'd rather not be an admin, soo i'm not really sure about what i'm going to do :|

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote: I'd rather not be an admin, soo i'm not really sure about what i'm going to do :|

      Why not? So long as you follow wikis guidelines, maintain a neutral and mature code of conduct and learn what to do, it's not that bad.

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    • Maybe i could just state some of the plot for certain scenes but not literally posting the scene itself, just like how i did when i first told you guys about Ty.

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    • Snivystorm wrote:

      TyEverGreen9 wrote: I'd rather not be an admin, soo i'm not really sure about what i'm going to do :|

      Why not? So long as you follow wikis guidelines, maintain a neutral and mature code of conduct and learn what to do, it's not that bad.

      I'm not feelin up to the task :( , I just want to talk about the story without having to do too much extra stuff

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote: Maybe i could just state some of the plot for certain scenes but not literally posting the scene itself, just like how i did when i first told you guys about Ty.

      You could do, but then we are unable to help with your clarity or writing and the overall flair you produce.

      Fair enough about the admin situation, you could always see if you could find someone else to be up to the task.

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    • <Sigh> Maybe i should just call off the FF :[

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    • Nah, don't give up on it! You've only just started! You gotta keep at it!

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    • I don't know man, I just came up with the plot and all that on a whim and then when i tried to write the story it kinda sucked and i'm not really much of a writer so i don't know what scenes to make or how long i want to make the story since i'm not really a big fan of writing long storys(Thx to Essays and school and whatnot), so i tried to get some help but it looks like i can't exactly post parts about it without extra stuff to do.

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    • As much as I love the idea of a story about Ellie and Relationships, I don't think i'm up to the task of writing a full one. I don't really have a problem with coming up with the plot and new ideas but the writing....is my bad point :(

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    • TyEverGreen9 wrote: As much as I love the idea of a story about Ellie and Relationships, I don't think i'm up to the task of writing a full one. I don't really have a problem with coming up with the plot and new ideas but the writing....is my bad point :(

      Well, if you really have no passion suffice to get past the sludge to write it, there is sadly nothing that I can do. Maybe one day you will be able to find the enthusiasm.

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    • I thought it would have been easy considering how easily i came up with the plot, but i probably will just leave it alone until i have the Ideas and energy to start a Fanfiction, I don't want to make it short but i also don't want to have to write like 24 pages of dialoge and details when i suck at it. I feel like a Fail now, cause i agreed to something and then just backed out T-T

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    • Sorry man :[

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    • i hate her why ? cause she saying too many shits . not like clem she says shits sommtimes

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    • Ala117 wrote:
      i hate her why ? cause she saying too many shits . not like clem she says shits sommtimes


      I understand where you're coming from, but I don't hate her for swearing a lot. That's pretty normal for someone that grew up in the kind of environment that she did. Not much adult influence/lack of good role models can really impact a kid's life later on.

      I didn't swear that much when I was her age, but I still swore quite a bit when no adults were around. Add Ellie's lack of upbringing/positive role models into the usual teenage stuff, and of course she'll come across as a bit rude.

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